Hello, and excuse me for any inconveniances, but I would wish to request for a slight edit of my plot - Krajina. These edits are in the included image. Thank you in advance.
(EDIT 2: I forgot to mark the Capital world 
, it’s supposed to be Carevo, much apologies)
Hello there, I’d like for the Osprian Dominate to be renamed to Osprian Timarchy since it sounds closer to what it actually is. Thanks in advance.
Number of desired plot: NPN 1
Name of plot: DOKAVIAN GRAND AMASSMENT (DOKAVIAN HORDE if too long)
Capital: Mok-Drapa, station (technically a ship)
Location of capital: In the exact center of the plot
Population: ~40 billion Dokavians, ~12 trillion “Tributaries”
Outline of History: The Dokavians are a nomadic species from outside of the sector, who were part of a large mass-migration. They used to use another dimension for their FTL travel, but somehow lost access to it during their last migration, around 200 BBT. Unable to continue their mass migrations, they set about conquering the native people and setting up a “temporary” state in order to more efficiently exist in their new state- the Dokavian Horde or the Grand Amassment. Before the Dokavian arrival, there were somewhere around 30 civilizations there, mostly pre-FTL, although 10 had achieved FTL and had limited colonies. All of those civilizations are now post FTL, and are “Tributaries” of the Dokavians, providing them with resources and being expanded throughout the region as fast as possible to provide more efficient resources to the Amassment.
The Dokavians do not live on planets- they live in their ships, always mobile. However, their subjects, whom they call “tributaries,” do and may. Tributaries do most of the economic work, in exchange for not being obliterated. Dokavians themselves are heavily engaged in things like piracy, sometimes directly, sometimes just hosting the pirates in their territory. This gives them an amazing relationship with the Hortek order. The Dokavian home economy is mostly manufacturing, especially since different groups have different shipbuilding traditions. Resources- extracted by tributaries- Are used to manufacture in giant ships that are essentially mobile dockyards. These mobile dockyards are where the Dossa tends to stay when there is no migration.
Outline of Major Species:
Dokavians: Dokavians, as a species, resemble birds in some ways, with a plume of feathers around their neck, bone-like bipedal legs, and feathers around their arms. In other regards, they are lizardlike, with tails that can regrow, claw-like hands, and scales over their face. It is thought that Dokavians were once able to fly, but sacrificed that for greater strength and dexterity. Dokavians range from 5-7 feet tall, and are strong, enough to overpower about 5 average human men. They also possess limited psionic powers, which means they have basic telepathy, capable of reading emotions, and can store memories long beyond what their brainpower should allow. Their leaders, especially Dossa, tend to have cybernetic enhancements to enhance their powers, and their memories are essentially eidetic. Dokavians tend to live for about 400 total years.
In addition, the most major tributary species are Humans, Zolve- a horned, grey-skinned species, and Dretsver, a subterranean, mole-like people.
Customization: None
This post has been conditionally approved by Legend in the moderator chat. As such, since I wrote the post, @Qwert has the power to fully approve or deny it.
Heya just noticed that the name of UoSV is wrong;
Seraphim’s Rest
Seraphina’s Rest
Number of desired plot: 36
Name of plot: CITRONELLA
Capital: Home
Location of capital: See map
Population: 251 billion
Outline of History: Citronella have a long and old history. The species took off across the stars [DATE, i’m yet to configure this] but entered a multi planetary nuclear war. Many planets were destroyed and their history lost. As Citronella set off across space once more, they once more entered turmoil when fascists known as Lemon Rose attempted to stage a coup. Now they set out terraforming planets, many which turn out to be those turned to nuclear wasteland.
They’ve had gene editing technology for a very long time, it is based in manipulating the ‘plants’. This is one of the technologies that remain after armageddon.
Outline of Major Species: Citronella come from a dark planet with a dim red dwarf star. Never evolving eyes, they are blind. They communicates through pheromones and have a symbiotic relationship with a fern like organism: they get food through photosynthesis. They also have fine hearing and touch, featuring a dish shaped head and tendrils they can extend from their bodies. Generally, they are dark in colour and their ‘plants’ glow.
Individuals can be extremely long lived and can theoretically live forever, however many choose to die of natural causes, largely succumbing to their own weight.
Also they don’t like being called bugs. Saying they resemble [invertebrates] is fine (usually) tho.
Customisation: See map. I will likely add more as Citronella recover dead planets.
Yes Dried Rose is where Lemon Rose first appeared.
@Galaxiel map added.
Also, can you remove Rehy?
For anyone whose missed it:
OO RAH WE BACK!!
Conditionally Approved
Welcome back!
@Stormfire10 @Caca Done! Let me know if there are any errors.
Hello, I would wish to request a few additional planets and change a few names of planets for my plot “Krajina” (formerly Slavonyya)
Edit: I uh… Didn’t notice the “A1-0 post-edit approvals”. Apologies if I was posting here wrongly. I would also request a population increase from 21 trillion to 31.4 trillion
can the capital of the Vandalence Compact’s capital on the map be renamed “Krysta” as shown on the wiki (old news i just forgot to do this lol)
