A1-0 post-edit approvals

Hello. We want to create a place to redo plot applications if you are changing stats. This is just to ensure that you don’t accidentally make something that we would reject.

NOTE: If you are changing your plot, post in the ORIGINAL map topic.

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Population:
Outline of History:
Outline of Major Species:

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Outline of History: Since I included lighten and darken here in the map thread, I figured this is the right place to change it. Whereas before I just had Lighten and Darken as an equivalent strong base and acid respectively and Null as “water”, having that be the extent of it no longer works for my intended purposes. I’d like to keep those aspects but modify null to have assimilative properties. In essence, in smaller quantities such as that used in Ascencion, it can assimilate into the system, but in larger quantities it could rather assimilate other entities into itself, and thus together in ways that could result in a gestalt consciousness.

Of course, I will be excusing myself from this decision

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Can I change my population to 25.9 trillion?

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please capitalize Post-edit Approvals :pray:

@Legend - approved
@isurvivedurm0m - approved

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No, cosmetic edits belong on the map thread :slight_smile:

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Oh, sorry.

So, I’m guessing I should post my plans here first before I post it in the main thread? Anyways, here we go.

Population: 40 – 60 trillion.

Outline of History:

Terran colonists arrived in what is today Aquila some thousand(?) years ago. They are descended from Terran colonists who came from Terra, but eventually lost contact with them. Eventually, a powerful family, known as the House of Maximilian came to rule over Aquila Prima, the most populated colony in the region, and fought against non-Terrans who have inhabited the region generations before the arrival of the colonists. They eventually exerted their influence over other minor houses, becoming the most prominent family in Aquila and being proclaimed as Margraves of the West for the Dovians when Aquila was part of the Dovian Empire.

Eventually, the Maximilian dynasty grew tired of being part of Dovia and wanted to free themselves from Dovian suzerainty. These hopes for sovereignty were realized during the Vor-Arï Wars when Margrave Alexander III von Maximilian openly revolted against both claimants to the Dovian throne. A civil war ensued between the Maximilianists (after the House of Maximilian, the Imperial House of Aquila) and the Sandovists (after the House of Sandovï’i, the Imperial House of Dovia). After the Vor-Arï Wars, Aquila secured its sovereignty. With the pro-Dovian faction locked in the dungeons, Margrave Alexander III had little to worry about as he was crowned Alexander I, Kaiser of Aquila.

After a period of relative peace and prosperity, Aquila became involved in the Great Hundred Years’ War against a restored Dovian Empire. After the wars’ end, the two nations became close as they found themselves in the ruins of war and bloodshed. The two nations would then, despite several attempts at disruption, formed the Pan-Terran League, heralding a new age of peace and cooperation amongst Terrans in A1-0.

Outline of Major Species: Humans/Terrans.

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Hey, sorry. This is for editing your post information after you’re approved, the map thread is still the right place to post this

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Ah alright then. Thanks!

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hello post edits I just want to do some historical revision and am posting here to get that reapproved, while also cutting a species I thought would be cool but in practice I didn’t end up using

Population: 5.4 Trillion
Outline of History: Vandalence is a rather small and sprawling nation that dates back to around 1500 years ago. Formed as a splinter group from other colonial efforts in the region, the Vandalence Compact grew from trading partnerships and defensive treaties over the course of 1000 years, eventually integrating and solidifying other smaller nations into a loose confederation of systems. Eventually, the nation slowed then stopped her expansion as nations on the periphery rejected joining. From there, the nation has thrived.

In terms of FTL, the nation uses Silverspace, a form of IFTL. Accessing it requires an access missile, which tears a hole into the turbulent dimension. Silverspace is highly corrosive, requiring a shielding system to be maintained to prevent being withered away. Permanent structures have been erected in silverspace, often anchored to important locations in the real world, like Horizon Gate.

Outline of Major Species:
60% Human - I’m only human, after all!
10% Edhel - See Mantiss’ Plot Claim.
15% Misc Species - Your halfsies and whatnot
5% Serniani - Bipedal Humanoids with an unnatural affinity for technology. Heavily Matriarchal.

Additionally - Should I make post-edit claims for all smaller nations in the Voidsea for compliance?

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It’s been months since we last used this, but I think the point was to dtop people from making massive or influential changes that could lead to problems arising between players again. I have not consulted anyone else on this btw

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Conditionally Approved
Stormfire10 Post-Edit Request


Not for now, but if other roleplayers bring up complaints we will take a look

Appended: Full Approval

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we wanna do some revision due to our lore having changed - it felt like we weren’t considering the numerous stars that would be in the area and focused on the systems we placed as seemingly being the only ones, making the populations extremely small in comparison to the amount of space that’s present in the YKQ-2421

Population: 494 trillion
460 trillion of these people are Qelua-Tei, i.e disembodied general AIs.
18 trillion are other forms of Qelua, who are varying forms of embodied general AIs, and 16 trillion are Ykate, who are organic. Most of the population lives in the major systems of the YKQ-2421, with less prevalent colonies existing that have populations ranging from only hundreds of millions of people to as few as hundreds of thousands of people.

Outline of History: The YKQ-2421’s history can be traced back to a mysterious progenitor civilization that existed 15,300 years ago. While this civilization was powerful, using dyson swarms and having proper FTL across many of their worlds, it was destroyed about 13,900 years ago by a gradual incrase in spacetime anomalies, creating an environment somewhat less harsh than the badlands, albeit still dangerous for FTL and dangerous enough to cause the collapse of society on numerous worlds via interference with infrastructure and general society as a whole - things would just disappear and reappear with little explanation.

Over the thousands of years since the collapse of this progenitor civilization, its founder species - the varying robotic Qelua and the organic Ykate - have established many societies. Some have spread out across their home system, others have regressed in technology and only recently achieved FTL. Entire systems, including the home system of the Ykate, were lost, but in their place, new systems have risen to become prominent in its stead, ranging from ecumenopoli to divided nation-states.

The formation of the YKQ-2421 itself came with the reinvention of FTL - numerous societies found a serial number simply stating “YKQ-2421.” The meaning was unclear, but given this anomalous area of space’s dangers and conflicts, this serial number was leveraged to be used as a name for a united polity of the region. As this gained more serious consideration thanks to escalating tensions, especially between the rising powers of the Twin Worlds of Valtuu and the Asvac League, the Anomalous Stars of YKQ-2421 were established as an international organization, and eventually consolidated into a loose league, with the planet named “2421-Teha” in the YKQ-0001 system becoming the foundation of a new capital as it was simply in between the seven founding systems of the Anomalous Stars.
Only recently have the Anomalous Stars of the YKQ-2421 reached out beyond their home space - their interest beyond this space was limited before recently as there was no motivation to go outside the ruins of the proto-YKQ-2421 civilization, as they provided protection via the anomalies present in the area.

Outline of Major Species: The two main species present in YKQ-2421 space are the Ykate, a bipedal species with four arms, skin colours in various shades of brown, beige, and spots and patterns of colours such as green, yellow, and red, a chitinous exoskeleton and a bony endoskeleton, four eyes, and split jaws, and their creations, the Qelua, who are divided into the Qelua-yta (androids who typically resemble Ykate, often only slight differences in appearance or even none at all), Qelua-yke (robots that, while resembling the Ykate via also being bipedal, otherwise resemble a Ykate in armour or are very clearly not Ykate-looking beyond their basic shape), Qelua-kye (does not resemble a Ykate at all), and the Qelua-tei (disembodied Qelua living in virtual spaces, whose appearances greatly vary). Many Ykate are cybernetically augmented, with non-cybernetically augmented Ykate being somewhat of a minority.

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Conditionally Approved

Approver note: While your populations fall in line with its guidelines, leading me to believe you’ve read it, just in case here is the community’s decision on AI populations. :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

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oh we did read that!! that’s why they fall in line - thanks tho

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Obviously I’ll be excusing myself from this decision, I just wanted to bump up my population from 19 trillion to 27 trillion

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This isn’t particularly extreme, so yeah lol

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oh yeah I need to make my population increase

50 Trillion Voidsea

split into

25 Trillion Vandalence

12.5 Trillion Independent Settlement

2.5 Trillion Serene Swords Republic

5 Trillion Orion League

5 Trillion Union of the Seraphim Veil

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