A1-0 post-edit approvals

Hello. We want to create a place to redo plot applications if you are changing stats. This is just to ensure that you don’t accidentally make something that we would reject.

NOTE: If you are changing your plot, post in the ORIGINAL map topic.

Template:
Population:
Outline of History:
Outline of Major Species:

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Outline of History: Since I included lighten and darken here in the map thread, I figured this is the right place to change it. Whereas before I just had Lighten and Darken as an equivalent strong base and acid respectively and Null as “water”, having that be the extent of it no longer works for my intended purposes. I’d like to keep those aspects but modify null to have assimilative properties. In essence, in smaller quantities such as that used in Ascencion, it can assimilate into the system, but in larger quantities it could rather assimilate other entities into itself, and thus together in ways that could result in a gestalt consciousness.

Of course, I will be excusing myself from this decision

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Can I change my population to 25.9 trillion?

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please capitalize Post-edit Approvals :pray:

@Legend - approved
@isurvivedurm0m - approved

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No, cosmetic edits belong on the map thread :slight_smile:

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Oh, sorry.

So, I’m guessing I should post my plans here first before I post it in the main thread? Anyways, here we go.

Population: 40 – 60 trillion.

Outline of History:

Terran colonists arrived in what is today Aquila some thousand(?) years ago. They are descended from Terran colonists who came from Terra, but eventually lost contact with them. Eventually, a powerful family, known as the House of Maximilian came to rule over Aquila Prima, the most populated colony in the region, and fought against non-Terrans who have inhabited the region generations before the arrival of the colonists. They eventually exerted their influence over other minor houses, becoming the most prominent family in Aquila and being proclaimed as Margraves of the West for the Dovians when Aquila was part of the Dovian Empire.

Eventually, the Maximilian dynasty grew tired of being part of Dovia and wanted to free themselves from Dovian suzerainty. These hopes for sovereignty were realized during the Vor-Arï Wars when Margrave Alexander III von Maximilian openly revolted against both claimants to the Dovian throne. A civil war ensued between the Maximilianists (after the House of Maximilian, the Imperial House of Aquila) and the Sandovists (after the House of Sandovï’i, the Imperial House of Dovia). After the Vor-Arï Wars, Aquila secured its sovereignty. With the pro-Dovian faction locked in the dungeons, Margrave Alexander III had little to worry about as he was crowned Alexander I, Kaiser of Aquila.

After a period of relative peace and prosperity, Aquila became involved in the Great Hundred Years’ War against a restored Dovian Empire. After the wars’ end, the two nations became close as they found themselves in the ruins of war and bloodshed. The two nations would then, despite several attempts at disruption, formed the Pan-Terran League, heralding a new age of peace and cooperation amongst Terrans in A1-0.

Outline of Major Species: Humans/Terrans.

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Hey, sorry. This is for editing your post information after you’re approved, the map thread is still the right place to post this

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Ah alright then. Thanks!

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hello post edits I just want to do some historical revision and am posting here to get that reapproved, while also cutting a species I thought would be cool but in practice I didn’t end up using

Population: 5.4 Trillion
Outline of History: Vandalence is a rather small and sprawling nation that dates back to around 1500 years ago. Formed as a splinter group from other colonial efforts in the region, the Vandalence Compact grew from trading partnerships and defensive treaties over the course of 1000 years, eventually integrating and solidifying other smaller nations into a loose confederation of systems. Eventually, the nation slowed then stopped her expansion as nations on the periphery rejected joining. From there, the nation has thrived.

In terms of FTL, the nation uses Silverspace, a form of IFTL. Accessing it requires an access missile, which tears a hole into the turbulent dimension. Silverspace is highly corrosive, requiring a shielding system to be maintained to prevent being withered away. Permanent structures have been erected in silverspace, often anchored to important locations in the real world, like Horizon Gate.

Outline of Major Species:
60% Human - I’m only human, after all!
10% Edhel - See Mantiss’ Plot Claim.
15% Misc Species - Your halfsies and whatnot
5% Serniani - Bipedal Humanoids with an unnatural affinity for technology. Heavily Matriarchal.

Additionally - Should I make post-edit claims for all smaller nations in the Voidsea for compliance?

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It’s been months since we last used this, but I think the point was to dtop people from making massive or influential changes that could lead to problems arising between players again. I have not consulted anyone else on this btw

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Conditionally Approved
Stormfire10 Post-Edit Request


Not for now, but if other roleplayers bring up complaints we will take a look

Appended: Full Approval

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