Oh that’s okay, no worries. I just wanted to make sure it hadn’t slipped up or something, ahah. Take your time.
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Number of Desired Plot: 03
Name of Plot: Drakari Celestial Imperium
Capital: Pax Drakon
Location of capital: Near the center of the plot
Population: 86 Trillion total (33 trillion Drakari, 53 trillion from numerous protectorate states)
Outline of History:
Roughly twelve-thousand years ago, the long-lived Drakari species would unify underneath the banner of the storied and well-respected House of Io, a dynasty claiming descent from the first king of the ancient Alavarri tribe. From there, their race would rapidly expand across their home system and, with the advent of the Warp Space engine, across the vast expanse of the void around them.
Over the course of countless centuries, the Drakari would colonize untold hundreds of worlds and would bring under their protection a number of smaller spacefaring civilizations. Even pre-spaceflight civilizations would be brought under their watchful gaze, blissfully unaware of their guardians in the stars, who stand vigilant against pirates, slavers, and untold horrors that lurk in the darkness.
The Imperium functions in an unusual combination of a semi-constitutional monarchy and a unicameral parliamentary democracy, with senators representing a number of worlds forming coalitions and alliances that have stood the test of time for many lifetimes.
Outline of Major Species: Drakari, Synths, Humans, Sinthari, Sosa, Yapatha, Kri’ghal, and Carsicoid.
Military Forces: Drakari Imperial Navy/the Imperial Legions (primary), Sosa Commandos, Terra Nova Navy/Marine Corps, Carsicoid Hive Fleets/Swarm Warriors, Sinthari Knights/Marauders, Yapatha Crusaders, Kri’ghal Defense Forces
Law Enforcement: The Imperial Guard
Intelligence Service: His Imperial Majesty’s Inquisition
Customization: Keep the old plot as is, for the most part, but if possible, try and add this bit of customization in:
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I request that Istria is removed from the map, I’ll probably submit a new plot request sometime in the future though.
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On it!
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Thank you!
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Aaaand done!
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I’d like to apologize for the delay, we should hopefully be able to operate faster again in the future
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Your population numbers and history are good, the only potential problem lies with the species. After some deliberation, we’ve decided that you only need to actually describe the species if they’re important (it does say Major Species after all). So Castemura, if you specify that the “+ many others” and “smaller species” aren’t very significant, you don’t need to outline them, and the same would apply to you Taisenbot. However, neither of you have really described your major species either.
You still need to finish this
@Galaxiel I’m sorry, I know the ping is a bit of a tease, but we still haven’t come to a decision. I know you’ve been waiting a while, but I’d rather we not rush this and come to a decision no-one likes.
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Number of desired plot: 11
Name of plot: PYHDON-D’OIEW SYSTEM
Capital: (Planet) PACIFICA (not Canon)
Location of capital: In Map
Population: 412 Billion
Outline of History:
Outline
Around 4,000 years ago, the Planetary Empires on Volai signed a treaty, adjoining them together under the d’Oiew Treaty (d’Oiew is the name of the city the treaty was signed in) that adjoined all the empires together into one system. The most influential system, Krasetryirac, decided that this jumble of systems will be called Pyhdon-d’Oiew System, and it’s capital will be on a planet called “Pacifica” (not related to the canon), with the main city called Malshatriacharias.
Over the years, some of the suns collapse onto eachother, like the Kelper System and the Achrais System, which left the planets colliding. This is the reason there are only 8 planets and 3 stations in Pyhdon d’Oiew, but no significant changes other than advanced space travel, interstellar nukes and a death star being created (as we want to make sure no invaders come in our territory)
Outline of Major Species:
Human (Homo Sapien) Read about here
Customization:
Planets
Pacifica (Not Canon)
Tyros
Kassicus
Volaria
Terra Aurora (Not Canon)
Vla11
Purnicas
Volai
Stations
Badoruc
Eros
Cass
I’m not a mod, but I can already tell you that there is no way you will be allowed to have Pacifica and Terra Aurora in your nation.
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It depends on the nature of the planets. If they are mean to be artificial reconstructions or just be named after the worlds (don’t know how that would work tor Aurora), then it can work.
@riditekhstudios However, if they are meant to be the actual planets, then no, you can’t have them in your plot.
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Even if they are just named after these planets, please add a distinguisher (like Nova Pacifica, hopefully something more original) so we:
A: Don’t have a bunch of planets named the same thing
B: Don’t have any confusion that the locations of the REAL pacifica and earth are unknown
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Your claim is completely missing the sections where you explain your history, population, etc. Please use the exact template in the first post, or we can not process your claim.
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No, these are just magpied names for different Planets
I see the changes, I just like to remind everyone that in the future you should be telling us when you make edits to your claim.
It seems like you have enough for us to look at, I just saw that your history states that you only have 8 planets. I’m not sure if this was a deliberate choice or a misunderstanding, but the planets on the map aren’t meant to be the only ones in your entire nation, they’re just meant to be the most important ones
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no, they are the most important, but the rest of the planets would be too numerous
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I just wanted to be sure, I misunderstood what you had meant by this ^
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Done with my history.
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Number of desired plot: 39
Name of plot: Slavonyyan Federation (Slavonyya)
Capital: DRʹŽAVʹNO STROJENIJE
Location of capital: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1057046773580959836/1135296031962169374/slika.png
Customization: 3 planets, 2 stations
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1057046773580959836/1135329785887850558/slika.png
(Planets: DRʹŽAVʹNO STROJENIJE, ČIST, BRANYBOR)
(Stations: GRANIČNICA, MIRNOVO)
Edit: I’ll come up with some history later, sadly I don’t have much time right now.
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Hey! Just wanted to let you know that you’re missing some required fields (beyond just history), and we can’t look at your claim until that’s added
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Number of desired plot: 39
Name of plot: Krajina
(renaming the plot, yes)
Capital: DRʹŽAVʹNO STROJENIJE
Location of capital:
Population: 21 trillion
Outline of History: Krajina was established on the planet of Branybor, and as its population on the newly colonized planet rose so did the need for space, and a second expedition was sent to what would later become Dr’žav’no Strojenije, the locals were quickly bombed and occupied, later stations were established such as Graničnica and Mirnovo to make communication easier, along with the planet Čistč being colonized too.
Outline of Major Species:
- Homo Sapiens: 16 trillion
- Other: 5 Trillion
Customization: Same as they currently are.
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